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Autumn's Glory by ~andar90:iconandar90:



So strange that death is met with grief
And tears that fall like rain
For Summer's death to Autumn's glory
Tells nothing of sadness or pain

The sun is strong in Summer's prime
And casts down joyous rays
Yet it's death-bound Autumn's golden gleam
That yield the brightest days

Proud Summer drapes her fruitful form
with vibrant, green attire
But Autumn's garbed in red and gold
Caught from a funeral pyre

Condolences for Summer's death
Are oh so very few
They're lost in swirls of morning mist
And shining, crystal dew

A songird fanfare splits the air
And carries through the trees
The feathered choir heralds snow
As it flees the chill on a rising breeze

A mournful wind blows through the boughs
A rain that only death could tame
Falling leaves of orange and red
Falling embers wrought of flame

Bring no tears to the newly dead
For nature won't grieve for a flower
It sings out its joy through the saphire sky
Its golden rapture in its final hour
©2009 ~andar90
:iconandar90:

Author's Comments

This poem is symbolic of how death is a part of life and can be looked at as a celebration of life. Any comments are welcome.

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:iconpenessence:
Fantastic, ah I suspect I will have to watch you

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We are such stuff as dreams are made on, rounded with a little sleep - The Tempest

*Rhyme-and-Reason ftw
:iconpenessence:
ps. songbird*

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We are such stuff as dreams are made on, rounded with a little sleep - The Tempest

*Rhyme-and-Reason ftw
:icontina-go-lightly:
Fantastic.
I must watch you as well!

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*Rhyme-and-Reason-check it out!

"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow
:iconrijjka:
Tis very nice imagery you've got in here, but i do have one quibble. Ahhh wait, you said few condolences not none... never mind then.

I was going to point out, that because I live in the region where winter is extra long and rather cold, summer is mourned to an extent. But I am babling.

The use of colours in your work for the contrast between summer and fall is very well done. As is the flow of the piece.

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"March on, ioine brauelie, let us to it pell mell, If not to heaven then hand in hand to hell." -Shakespeare's Richard III
:iconandar90:
Thank you for the kind words. Every season is mourned to an extent. I was just exaggerating it for the sake of the poem. Thanks for not being afraid to point out shortcomings!

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